Review of Miss Bennet’s Dragon by M Verant

This is a review of Miss Bennet’s Dragon by M Verant, a Pride and Prejudice inspired fantasy. 

The full title is Miss Bennet’s Dragon: A Pride and Prejudice Retelling (Jane Austen Fantasy Book 1). Personally, I disagree with the author calling it a retelling. I think it’s a variation as are all Pride and Prejudice inspired fantasy stories.

This fantasy novel is about dragons, so I was interested to see how it compared to Maria Grace’s Pride and Prejudice inspired dragon series – Jane Austen’s Dragons.

One thing I noticed straight off was that this novel is written in the first person. This is unusual. I don’t remember having read any other Pride and Prejudice inspired novels that are in the first person. Normally, they’re written in the third person. I thought it made for a more immersive experience. It’s written from the viewpoint of Elizabeth Bennet.

Setting

The set-up is quite different in this novel from Maria Grace’s novels. The gentry hold their estates through inheritance and/or bonding with a dragon when they first marry and consummate the marriage. They also need “marriage gold” to bond a dragon. If the husband dies, the family will lose their estate unless the son and his wife bond with a dragon. If there is no male heir then unless a daughter has married and the couple have bonded, the estate will be lost. Lady Catherine de Bourgh is a major exception to this societal rule. 

Oh, and dragons are called “draca” in this novel.

I loved the different types of dragons (or draca) in the novel. None of them seem to be that big unlike Maria Grace’s. They have great names such as tunnelworm, roseworm and lindworm, etc. 

Plot

This novel is quite dark, a fair few characters die. I wouldn’t describe it as a light and fluffy Pride and Prejudice inspired novel.

The plot involves draca and French spies. I don’t want to say more and give the plot away.

One change to the original plot is that Jane becomes ill at Netherfield through being bitten by a foul crawler rather than catching cold on the way there. This is potentially fatal until Elizabeth is guided by a Scottish laundry maid to get Jane to drink a few drops of draca blood. And then Jane falls sick with binding sickness because she is in love with Bingley who has gone away to America so, she’s in danger of dying unless Elizabeth can find a way to save her. This is the reason Elizabeth visits Pemberley in order to find a cure for Jane. I liked how the author adapted the original plot.

Another change to the plot is that Mr Collins and Charlotte don’t bind a draca so he loses the claim to Longbourn. However, the Bennets are still at risk unless a Bennet daughter and her husband can bind a draca. Enter Lydia. It seems Wickham had an ulterior motive in seducing her. 

Characters

Elizabeth is a very strong character; she holds the family together. She’s basically running the estate for her father. Elizabeth has a telepathic bond with dragons. They will all obey her.

I did like the version of Mr Darcy in this novel. He’s the strong, silent but passionate type. He certainly goes above and beyond for Elizabeth.

I wasn’t sure about Jane in this novel. She seemed a bit of an air head to me once or twice in this novel. And as the eldest, wouldn’t she have had some involvement/training in the estate? She does play a very passive role.

Mary Bennet in this novel reminded me of the heroine of The Independence of Miss Mary Bennet by Colleen McCullough. She’s much more interesting than the original Mary in Pride and Prejudice. She’s a feminist and would be social reformer, even a bit of a goth. She and Lizzie are very close in the novel.

Lydia is probably the most evil that I’ve seen her character be in any of the Pride and Prejudice inspired novels that I’ve read so far. And Wickham is pretty evil too. 

Summary

Miss Bennet’s Dragon was an enjoyable and gripping read if darker than most Pride and Prejudice inspired fantasy novels.

Longbourn: Dragon Entail by Maria Grace

WARNING: SPOILER ALERT

Longbourn: Dragon Entail is the second in the Jane Austen Dragons series by Maria Grace. The first was Pemberley: Mr Darcy’s Dragon. This novel is as enjoyable as the first one.

Plot

It takes up the story where it left off in the first novel. Pemberley, the baby dragon, has been carted off to Rosings at the insistence of Longbourn the estate dragon. He’s jealous of the bond between Elizabeth and Pemberley. Elizabeth doesn’t know it’s Longbourn’s fault and blames Darcy.

Mr Bennet and Longbourn the estate dragon, are still insisting that Elizabeth marries Mr Collins who is dragon deaf, and she tries to go along with it until she thinks they are trying to mentally manipulate her into marrying him. This is totally against the Dragon code, and she decides to leave Longbourn and go to London. I really disliked this version of Mr Bennet and my dislike of Longbourn, the estate dragon, only increased in this sequel.

She then goes to the Blue Order where her notebooks on the care of dragons is of great interest and bumps into Mr Darcy who’s been about to go to Longbourn because Pemberley is pining for her. Georgiana Darcy has been sending her letters but Mr Bennet has been hiding them. Elizabeth goes to Rosings and is reunited with Pemberley who is just as cute as in the first book.

Lady Catherine tries to order her to marry Mr Collins – they have the scene that happens in the original when Lady Catherine visits Longbourn. Then Elizabeth leaves the house and bumps into Mr Collins, He then gives her Mr Darcy’s original marriage proposal from the original. Elizabeth is no more impressed with Mr Collins giving it than she was with Mr Darcy. Unfortunately, Mr Collins persists in following her and comes across the dragons. This is a big NO NO as humans who can’t hear dragons are not meant to know about them.

The Blue Order assesses Pemberley to see whether she is feral or not and decide what to do about the “dragon deaf” Mr Collins. He ends up engaged to Mary who will become the Longbourn dragon keeper after Mr Bennet.

By the end of the novel, Elizabeth and Darcy are getting to know and appreciate each other. Elizabeth becomes engaged to Darcy, but Lydia has run away possibly with a rogue dragon which is VERY BAD NEWS. Cue the next novel.

Things I liked about Longbourn: Dragon Entail

The author uses some of the dialogue from the original, which I like. In the original, Mr Darcy proposes to Elizabeth at Rosings. In this novel, it’s Mr Collins who proposes to Elizabeth using Darcy’s words. It sounds even worse with Mr Collins saying it and unsurprisingly, Elizabeth refuses him.

We learn more fascinating details about the dragons living at Rosings.

Things I didn’t like about Longbourn: Dragon Entail

I can’t understand why Elizabeth blames herself for the way Longbourn behaves when it’s clearly the fault of her father for not being a very good Dragon Keeper.