Dangerous Magic by Monica Fairview

Monica Fairview has written a fair few Pride and Prejudice inspired or Austnesque novels, mainly variations but a few sequels. She’s not written any other Pride and Prejudice inspired fantasy novels apart from the two in this series although she has written Steampunk Darcy set in the future (which I intend to read and review at some point).

Dangerous Magic: A Pride & Prejudice Fantasy Variation is set in Regency England where magic is real. It’s the first in a series – Mr Darcy’s Magic. It has a similar premise to Abigail Reynold’s Mr Darcy’s Enchantment but this variation is quite different. Here, mages are involved in the war against Napoleonic France. It did remind me a little of Susannah Clarke’s Jonathan Strange and Mr Norrell.

Plot

Lizzie Bennet is forced to marry Mr Darcy because he is a Janus Mage whose “twin” has recently died and he needs a new one. Because she is female, they must marry to be respectable. They need to bond but find it difficult and need to find out what or who is stopping them from bonding. On the way, they fall in love.

There is a rigid hierarchical structure, there are Royal Mages and Rogue Mages. Royal Mages are descended from pure blood lines, have been trained at academies and work with spells from spell books. Rogue mages are less traditional driven. There are several types of mages, Healers, Warders, and Elementals. Mages who haven’t formally trained at an academy like Elizabeth are looked down on. Families like Darcy’s with generations of Royal Mages are in the top set of society. Mixed marriages are frowned on. This really reminded me of the Harry Potter series – “muggles” and “mudbloods”.

Characters

Some of the characters have been cut such as Charlotte. Mr Collins and Mr Wickham, and Jane is barely mentioned although they may appear more in the next novel. Lady Catherine De Bourgh plays only a minor part in the story, Lady Alice Enright seems to take over her role for this story. While Lizzie’s family and the Bingleys all appear indeed, Caroline Bingley is a supporting character.

I liked the way Lizzie and Mr Darcy came to understand and appreciate each other. I also liked that this novel reflected the original by having Mr Darcy change his attitude about the way magic was organised and the rigid hierarchical structure. And Lizzie come to realise that there is keeping to the rules is sometimes the best thing to do.

Style

I also liked the way the author wove parts of the dialogue from the original novel into hers.

For example, when Lady Alice insults her by asking her if she is chaste, this is Elizabeth’s reply – “If I were not,” said Elizabeth, stung by Lady Alice’s audacity, “you could hardly expect me to admit it”. And when Darcy expresses his feelings to Elizabeth about the proposed marriage, he says, “Do you think I can rejoice in the inferiority of your connections?’

Summary

In short, Dangerous Magic is an entertaining, well written novel. If you like your Pride and Prejudice inspired novels mixed with magic, then you’ll love it.

Pride and Post Apocalypse

Cover of Pride and Post Apocalypse

I was attracted to Pride and Post Apocalypse: A Regency Dystopian by Lauren M Flauding by the words ‘Post Apocalypse‘ although the sub title, A Regency Dystopian, had me wondering how you could have a Regency dystopian. After all, most dystopian novels are science fiction. One classic example is 1984 by George Orwell (which was in the future when he wrote it).

Turns out like this – there’s been a major EMP (Electromagnetic Pulse) in modern times so nothing electrical works. Chaos ensues in Great Britain until a dictator called the Badger takes over. For some reason, wealth is now decided on the number of books people own and distributed accordingly. Oh, and women can’t work and can’t inherit books. A touch of the Taliban there. And the Badger wants everyone to adopt old-style manners and customs. Which they do. So far, so rather implausible.

Mr Darcy it turns out is part of a rebel group that is plotting to overthrow The Badger. However, this isn’t as important to the plot as you might think.

Style of Novel

It’s also a mash up novel which is where roughly 80% of the novel is the original text & 20% is new text that fits the genre it’s supposed to be. I like mash ups if they’re well done. I love Pride and Prejudice and Zombies by Seth Graham-Smith, and Pride and Platypus by Vera Nazarian. 

The novel starts out well but then you read several chapters at a time before there are any changes to the text or plot. I wanted to have some changes to the text in every chapter.

I did like the Bennets having a car that is pulled by a horse. That made me laugh.

Summary

I don’t want to be too harsh, the author obviously spent time and effort on it. But I felt there were some missed opportunities in it.