Review of Mary Bennet and the Bingley Codex

Book cover of Mary Bennet and the Bingley Codex

Mary Bennet and the Bingley Codex is the first of the Regency Mage series of novels by Joyce Harmon. They feature Mary Bennet, the third and plainest of the Bennet sisters. This first novel is about how Mary becomes a magician.

The novel is told in the first person. It’s only the second Pride and Prejudice inspired fantasy novel I’ve come across to do that. The other one was Miss Bennet’s Dragon by M Verant(I’ve also reviewed that novel).I rather liked the story being told from Mary Bennet’s point of view. 

Plot

Mary is visiting Jane and Bingley and offers to catalogue their library. Within the library she discovers a cache of old books and one special one teaches her how to do magic. When she successfully casts a spell to end a drought, she attracts the attention of the Order of St George, who regulate magic in the United Kingdom. Two magicians, Mr Danvers and Mr White are sent to find the source of the magic and end up training her. Then Mr Danvers and Mr White go missing, and it is up to Mary to help them.

Characters

This Mary Bennet comes across as a very different character from Jane Austen’s novel. Although she is bookish, she is pragmatic and shrewd. Mary is also a good judge of character. She knows the way to stop Kitty coming along on the proposed visit to Jane and Bingley, is to use Kitty’s reluctance to gamble and play on her fears that her suitors may forget her if she stays away too long. She is also quite outspoken, when Mr Hastings, one of Bingley’s friends but an annoying guest, makes delicate enquiries as to her assets, she tells him straight out, “My portion, sir, is tiny. There.” Also, Mary is the only person to think it odd that nobody has a bad word to say about Mr Spencer, a popular local bachelor.

One thing I found a little difficult to believe is that Mary would know what homosexuals were even if she had studied ancient Greek literature, and that she would be as tolerant as she is. But it’s a minor point.

Some of the original characters appear in this novel: Kitty, Mrs Bennet, Mr Bennet, Jane, and Mr Bingley. Some have cameo roles while Jane and Mr Bingley have supporting roles. There’s a whole subplot involving Caroline Bingley who invites herself to stay and a suitor who appears for her.  I thought it was interesting that Lizzie and Mr Darcy barely get a mention. Will they appear more in other novels in the series?

I didn’t like that the author made Jane and Mr Bingley less intelligent and literate than they were in the original. In the novel, they have no interest in the library, which is necessary for the plot, but I thought did them a disservice.

Setting

I liked the setting of the novel. Only certain people know about magic. I did like that that there were no traditions or laws against women being magicians. And that there were dragons (or perhaps still are) and water sprites and pixies. Mary has a mix of talents, she can scry (when a little inebriated), persuade, and do water and fire work. She’s not very good at levitating objects though.

I loved the idea of a notebook that you could write messages in, and another magician could write back to you wherever s/he was. Also, that it was shielded so that if any one non magical saw it, they would think it had the usual sort of notes.

Overall, I thought it was a well written and entertaining novel. I’m looking forward to reading the next in the series.

Longbourn: Dragon Entail by Maria Grace

WARNING: SPOILER ALERT

Longbourn: Dragon Entail is the second in the Jane Austen Dragons series by Maria Grace. The first was Pemberley: Mr Darcy’s Dragon. This novel is as enjoyable as the first one.

Plot

It takes up the story where it left off in the first novel. Pemberley, the baby dragon, has been carted off to Rosings at the insistence of Longbourn the estate dragon. He’s jealous of the bond between Elizabeth and Pemberley. Elizabeth doesn’t know it’s Longbourn’s fault and blames Darcy.

Mr Bennet and Longbourn the estate dragon, are still insisting that Elizabeth marries Mr Collins who is dragon deaf, and she tries to go along with it until she thinks they are trying to mentally manipulate her into marrying him. This is totally against the Dragon code, and she decides to leave Longbourn and go to London. I really disliked this version of Mr Bennet and my dislike of Longbourn, the estate dragon, only increased in this sequel.

She then goes to the Blue Order where her notebooks on the care of dragons is of great interest and bumps into Mr Darcy who’s been about to go to Longbourn because Pemberley is pining for her. Georgiana Darcy has been sending her letters but Mr Bennet has been hiding them. Elizabeth goes to Rosings and is reunited with Pemberley who is just as cute as in the first book.

Lady Catherine tries to order her to marry Mr Collins – they have the scene that happens in the original when Lady Catherine visits Longbourn. Then Elizabeth leaves the house and bumps into Mr Collins, He then gives her Mr Darcy’s original marriage proposal from the original. Elizabeth is no more impressed with Mr Collins giving it than she was with Mr Darcy. Unfortunately, Mr Collins persists in following her and comes across the dragons. This is a big NO NO as humans who can’t hear dragons are not meant to know about them.

The Blue Order assesses Pemberley to see whether she is feral or not and decide what to do about the “dragon deaf” Mr Collins. He ends up engaged to Mary who will become the Longbourn dragon keeper after Mr Bennet.

By the end of the novel, Elizabeth and Darcy are getting to know and appreciate each other. Elizabeth becomes engaged to Darcy, but Lydia has run away possibly with a rogue dragon which is VERY BAD NEWS. Cue the next novel.

Things I liked about Longbourn: Dragon Entail

The author uses some of the dialogue from the original, which I like. In the original, Mr Darcy proposes to Elizabeth at Rosings. In this novel, it’s Mr Collins who proposes to Elizabeth using Darcy’s words. It sounds even worse with Mr Collins saying it and unsurprisingly, Elizabeth refuses him.

We learn more fascinating details about the dragons living at Rosings.

Things I didn’t like about Longbourn: Dragon Entail

I can’t understand why Elizabeth blames herself for the way Longbourn behaves when it’s clearly the fault of her father for not being a very good Dragon Keeper.

Darcy Bites: Pride and Prejudice with Fangs by Amy Elizabeth Davis

Warning: Spoiler Alert

Darcy Bites Book Cover

In this post, I’ll be reviewing Darcy Bites: Pride And Prejudice With Fangs by Amy Elizabeth Davis. I almost didn’t read this Pride and Prejudice inspired paranormal novel because I thought the cover looked amateurish. However, I’m glad I gave it a chance because it was well written and entertaining.

There’s a few Pride and Prejudice inspired vampire novels around but only one other one I can think of where he’s a dhampir. Vampire Darcy’s Desire: A Pride and Prejudice Paranormal Vagary by Regina Jeffers.

It’s very nearly a mashup novel (where 80% of the text comes from a classic novel and 20% is original like Pride and Prejudice and Zombies). There’s lots of the original text in the novel. For example, Darcy does indeed say to Bingley that Elizabeth “is tolerable but not handsome enough to tempt me”. 

However, the author also often slightly changes the text.

For example, Elizabeth says to Darcy. “Did you not think, Mr. Darcy, that I expressed myself uncommonly well just now, when I was teasing Colonel Foster to spar with me?”

“With great energy, but it could hardly be a fair match.”

‘You are severe on Colonel Foster.”

Plot

The plot is as follows: Darcy is a dhampir (half vampire/half human). His mother was a vampire, and his father was human. He accompanies Mr Bingley to Netherfield Hall because it was attacked by vampires eighteen years ago. He wants to make sure that there are no vampires still lurking in the area. As per the original, he only becomes interested in Elizabeth after the assembly. Wickham makes an appearance. he’s also a dhampir and abuses his powers. 

Elizabeth has been trained in martial arts (reminded me of Pride and Prejudice and Zombies) and volunteers as bait. Lady Catherine does come to visit Elizabeth, but she demands that Elizabeth promise not to marry Darcy and tries to kill her when she refuses. Darcy saves Elizabeth, and he stakes his aunt. This doesn’t kill her, but it does leave her comatose. She winds up imprisoned in his cellar for several years.

There are several discoveries about different characters: Wickham is a dhampir who abuses his ability to mesmerise people. Bingley is a werewolf and Mr Bennet is also a dhampir which is why Elizabeth has super hearing and is good at fighting. Jane, it turns out is the adopted daughter of Mr and Mrs Bennet. They had a son, Edmund, who was killed when he was young because he became feral. Mr Bennet makes his wife forget about Edmund (this reminded me of Abigail Reynold’s Mr Darcy’s Enchantment where a similar thing occurs).

Things I liked in Darcy Bites

Darcy is a dhampir not a vampire, which made a refreshing change.

Mr Darcy is aloof at the assembly because he‘s thirsty and wants to avoid the temptation of biting a human. 

Elizabeth has a sense of humour and says witty things.

Bingley has a secret of his own although it’s pretty obvious early on what it is.

How the author changed the plot to fit in with the paranormal theme. For example, Wickham spreads rumours that Mr Darcy killed his own mother and brother.

Things I didn’t like about Darcy Bites

The cover. It really doesn’t do the novel justice.

For me, the epilogue went on too long. I could see the point of including Anna as a child as it related to Mr Darcy’s fears about going feral. However, I wasn’t that interested in the lives of Mr Darcy and Elizabeth’s children. I’m probably the odd woman out there though.

Pemberley: Mr Darcy’s Dragon by Maria Grace

A tagline for Pemberley: Mr Darcy’s Dragon reads “Pern meets Pride and Prejudice”. I could see that. There were echoes of Pern especially the fairy dragons that reminded me of the fire lizards in the Pern series by Anne McCaffrey. However, the novel also reminded me of the Temeraire series by Naomi Novik.

This was a very entertaining read. After all, what’s not to like – Pride and Prejudice and dragons? Mr Darcy comes to Meryton looking for his stolen dragon egg that he needs desperately. If the egg hatches and is not bonded to a human, it will become a wild dragon and threaten the peace agreement between humans and dragons. Elizabeth Bennet can speak to dragons. She’s intended to marry Mr Collins because the estate will pass to him, and the estate’s dragon needs a dragon keeper (one who can hear dragons).

The egg hatches in the wild so there’s a race to find it so it doesn’t go feral.

I found it interesting that Mr Bennet in this novel insists that Elizabeth marry Mr Collins because she is the heir to the Dragon’s Keeper. Quite different from his attitude in the original Pride and Prejudice.

I also found it interesting that Mary is the only other Bennet sister who can hear dragons and not Jane, Elizabeth’s favourite sister. In the other fantasy Pride and Prejudice inspired novels I’ve read, it’s usually poor old Mary who lacks any magical ability.

I really loved the different types of dragons in Pemberley: Mr Darcy’s Dragon. Wyverns, cockatrices, fairy dragons, tatzelwurms. The fairy dragons strongly reminded me of the fire lizards in the Pern series and were just as enchanting. Rumblekins the Tatzelwurm, who is a cat like dragon was one of my favourites. Pemberley the baby dragon is very sweet.

Maria Grace uses a lot of the original text in this novel and does it very cleverly. She sometimes transfers speeches from one character to another. For example, Charlotte Lucas’s cynical speech about marriage is given to Mr Bennet to encourage Elizabeth to marry Mr Collins. I imagine most readers will enjoy spotting the snippets of original text.

I definitely want to read more in this series.

Pride and Post Apocalypse

Cover of Pride and Post Apocalypse

I was attracted to Pride and Post Apocalypse: A Regency Dystopian by Lauren M Flauding by the words ‘Post Apocalypse‘ although the sub title, A Regency Dystopian, had me wondering how you could have a Regency dystopian. After all, most dystopian novels are science fiction. One classic example is 1984 by George Orwell (which was in the future when he wrote it).

Turns out like this – there’s been a major EMP (Electromagnetic Pulse) in modern times so nothing electrical works. Chaos ensues in Great Britain until a dictator called the Badger takes over. For some reason, wealth is now decided on the number of books people own and distributed accordingly. Oh, and women can’t work and can’t inherit books. A touch of the Taliban there. And the Badger wants everyone to adopt old-style manners and customs. Which they do. So far, so rather implausible.

Mr Darcy it turns out is part of a rebel group that is plotting to overthrow The Badger. However, this isn’t as important to the plot as you might think.

Style of Novel

It’s also a mash up novel which is where roughly 80% of the novel is the original text & 20% is new text that fits the genre it’s supposed to be. I like mash ups if they’re well done. I love Pride and Prejudice and Zombies by Seth Graham-Smith, and Pride and Platypus by Vera Nazarian. 

The novel starts out well but then you read several chapters at a time before there are any changes to the text or plot. I wanted to have some changes to the text in every chapter.

I did like the Bennets having a car that is pulled by a horse. That made me laugh.

Summary

I don’t want to be too harsh, the author obviously spent time and effort on it. But I felt there were some missed opportunities in it. 

Reviewing Pride and Prejudice Inspired Fiction

I love Pride and Prejudice fanfiction otherwise known as Austenesque fiction or, as I prefer to call it Pride and Prejudice inspired fiction because fanfiction implies (at least to me) that the story is available to read for free and there are many Pride and Prejudice fiction authors who are making a good living from their writing. Austenesque also doesn’t seem accurate enough to me because Austenesque included works inspired by all of Jane Austen’s classic novels. Because I love it so much, I’ve decided to start reviewing Pride and Prejudice inspired fiction.

My criteria will be:

It has to be Pride and Prejudice inspired fiction (duh!)

It has to fall into one of these categories:

a) paranormal

b) fantasy

d) science fiction

d) mystery

e) genderswapped

f) modern retelling

because those are the categories of Pride and Prejudice inspired fiction that I most enjoy reading.

Even with those criteria which excludes many, many Pride and Prejudice inspired fiction, there are still a lot of books to read. Last time I counted, there were well over three hundred Pride and Prejudice inspired novels/novellas/short stories. I calculate that will give me over a hundred books to read and review.

I’ll be reviewing Pride and Prejudice inspired fiction regularly or as regularly as I can, sometimes life and writing gets in the way.